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FMA Drabble: Sensory (Roy x Ed, NC-17)

  • Feb. 12th, 2006 at 10:54 AM
Roy x Ed - Pervy!Sweet
So, while Lyko was sleeping I stole some of her writing motivation through a straw. Don't tell her!

Title: Sensory
Pairing: Roy x Ed
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Descriptive experiment, PWP-ish
Summary: Roy has an enjoyable morning. Kyt does an experiment in style. Savor the pron!



Sensory


Sight

Ed's naked body spread out below him. Angles and curves, smooth tanned skin and rough pink scars. A Yuletime present waiting to be opened, familiar territory begging to be explored again and again. Edward's golden eyes, almost fathomless in the faint light, called him closer.


Smell

The warm musky smell of his lover's body. Except for Ed's hair... that blond mass always smelt faintly of strawberries. His shampoo, Roy suspected, as he moved closer and inhaled deeply. He needed more. He needed Edward. All of him.


Taste

Strange, how Ed always tasted faintly sweet under the salty sheen of their mixed sweat. As if all the snacks he knew perfectly well the Elric gobbled when his younger brother wasn't looking somehow affected his flavor. And wasn't it just like Edward Elric? A hidden bit of sweet under what one would expect... that was his lover.

Touch

Meetings were rapidly bleeding into partings, faster and faster. His hand slowly slid up the unmarked thigh, savoring the texture of Ed's skin. The feel of cotton sheets around them, tangled up between their limbs and torsos. And Edward's lips... Oh, they were so smooth. His mouth so warm.


Sound

His name was being hissed through clenched teeth. Their breath roughly crescendo-ed as they crept closer and closer to climax. Yes, they were nearly there now-- just a little bit more. He could hear himself moaning loudly... he hadn't even realized he was doing so.

Almost there.

****

Yes, there were many reasons why Roy was late to work nearly every day.

Comments

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[info]wicked_pistil wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 05:12 pm (UTC)
Drabble, I keep you forever and ever.

This is lovely. Your descriptions are gorgeous and the format is really effective. Beautiful work, as always! ^__^
[info]moon_wing wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 09:04 pm (UTC)
Icon love!!!!
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[info]badninja wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 05:26 pm (UTC)
This is awesome. I just woke up, so I can't give a better summary, but you rock.
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:20 pm (UTC)
Wow, thank you! :)
[info]cryogenia wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 05:44 pm (UTC)
;_; KYT I MISSED YOU. And I missed your porn. This is just what I needed this morning.
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:20 pm (UTC)
*glomps* Awww, Cryo! I missed you too! And I'm glad to have helped with your morning!
[info]crack_alchemist wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 06:21 pm (UTC)
veeeerrry nice....
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ^_^
[info]threeonetwo wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 06:31 pm (UTC)
Woah...that was just...beautifully written. I love the detail.
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:21 pm (UTC)
I appreciate it! Thank you for reviewing. :)
[info]dusk wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 06:33 pm (UTC)
Yummy. ♥ *o*
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it!
[info]thatonefangirl wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 07:09 pm (UTC)
Ooh, I like 8D I like a lot. It's hot and beautiful, I love it :D
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:22 pm (UTC)
*flushes* Gosh, thank you! I'm glad that you do!
[info]xorigamilove wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 07:30 pm (UTC)
Adorable. Made me melt a wee bit.

[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:22 pm (UTC)
*scoops you up into a cup*

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_^
[info]tir_synni wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 07:36 pm (UTC)
Sweet and luscious. Beautiful descriptions.
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:23 pm (UTC)
*happy* I'm glad my experiment in style sorta worked out. I know descriptive text was my true weakness...!

Thank you!
[info]strawberrykaoru wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 08:14 pm (UTC)
Ooh, interesting format! =0

And just mmm. ♥
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:23 pm (UTC)
I'm glad people like it, I was a bit worried it'd be too weird for people!

Thank you! :)
[info]chrstphrl wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 08:35 pm (UTC)
Just gorgeous. This style really suits you. Beautifully written as always. You made me brethless and hot. *pants*
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:24 pm (UTC)
Wow, really?! Thank you! I'm going to try stuff like this more often in the future, now that I know I can do it.

You are too kind! *_*
[info]moon_wing wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 09:03 pm (UTC)
*melts* Positively wonderful!!!

*adds to memories*
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:25 pm (UTC)
*scoops you into a cup too* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Oh wow, I'm honored! ^_^
[info]divinepocky wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 09:14 pm (UTC)
Delicious, you kick ass in so many ways ^_^
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:25 pm (UTC)
Awwww, thank you! I'm just happy you enjoyed it and really appreciate the review!
[info]mikkeneko wrote:
Feb. 12th, 2006 11:40 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was gorgeous. *_*
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:26 pm (UTC)
That means a lot coming from you, Mikke. Thank you! *_*
[info]master_of_yaoi wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 12:03 am (UTC)
mmm smex *drool* i love it
[info]zalia wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 01:10 am (UTC)
*______*

So good... like chocolate.

Such a good fic, Kyt! Perfect descriptions and very very sweet ^__^

Lovely work!!!
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:26 pm (UTC)
Wow, like chocolate?! :O Wow!

Thank you! I'm glad they didn't sound too hokey. I was a bit worried about that!

I appreciate it!
[info]chikotli wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 03:46 am (UTC)
I haven't read any of your fanfics in awhile. Its not my otp, but having Roy's pov fixed that for meh. Very smexy! X3
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:27 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I haven't written in a while. ^_^;;

Wow, thank you! If it helps, almost every single fic of mine is written from his POV. He's my muse or something. :)
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[info]engine_blue wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 03:50 am (UTC)
he hee hee
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:27 pm (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed it!
[info]devils_devotion wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 03:56 am (UTC)
Meetings were rapidly bleeding into partings, faster and faster.

I like this line, very much so. ^___^ Stylistically, this was very pretty, but MAN I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN YOU'D THROW THAT ENDING LINE IN THERE, YOU. >D Turns it into a Kyt!fic far more than anything else.

I miss you, you know. ;___;
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:29 pm (UTC)
That was one of the lines I had planned out before I started writing. I just KNEW I HAD to use it! And I'm glad it didn't sound silly or something...

*laughs* I just can't help myself! :D

*hugs* Miss ya too! And glad you liked the fic. You deserve a lot of credit for me writing it. You are always so supportive and kind!
[info]akari_hayashi wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 06:20 am (UTC)
Aww, this is so beautiful~ I wuv you! *hugz* Now, if only this is longer... ^^
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:29 pm (UTC)
*glomps* Wuv you too! Thank you!

Eheheh, short fics seem to be my curse. T_T
[info]vanilla_scream wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 08:43 am (UTC)
Oo......


*luvs*
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm happy you liked!
[info]syunikissd wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 12:15 pm (UTC)
zomg!!! *love*
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:32 pm (UTC)
*loves back* Thank you! ^_^ You are too kind.
[info]zequs wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 12:43 pm (UTC)
oh.. so sweet ♥♥
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:32 pm (UTC)
Icon love!

And thank you... I appreciate it!
[info]ithronluin wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 03:59 pm (UTC)
Ohhh...nice. XD A different method of putting the drabble thru~ And yes, the mental images are just very nice XDXD
[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:33 pm (UTC)
Yes, I wanted to try something a little different. I'm so glad everyone seems to like it!

Than you! I'm really happy. :)
[info]ikuyona wrote:
Feb. 13th, 2006 07:59 pm (UTC)
*is in a daze*

Man, I wish that was how my five senses were experienced. XD

[info]kytyngurl2 wrote:
Feb. 15th, 2006 01:33 pm (UTC)
Oh man, don't we all?! :o

Thank you!
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